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Hey guys :wave:

Finally I can show you the picture to *OneWingedMuse's Song-Contest.
I worked long on this and I have to say I like it a lot.
It's to Daughtry's Song „What about now“ (also I think it fits with the song of Disney's Brother Bear 2 „It will be me“ by Melissa Etheridge :heart: I love these two songs together)


So I have also some sentences to the single situations on the picture:

Kanto: „What is this pain I feel inside my heart?“
Hoenn: „Without you I'm not complete“
Hands on the top: „I was a fool of losing you“
Hands on the bottom: „There is no need to fear anymore“
Sinnoh: „What about now?
What about today?
What if you're making me
all that I was meant to be?
What if our love
never went away?
What if it's lost behind
words we could never find?
Baby, before it's too late
what about now?“

© Daughtry, „What about now“

So, this is only a little bit to understand what I thought about when I drew the picture and a also a little bit you can think your own parts as story to the picture :meow:
It's the first time I made rain... How long am I drawing now? 9 1/2 years?? SHAME at me!
And it's the first time I have all clothes in one picture *o* :excited:


Hope you like it.
I've to admit I'm very proud of it.
Pokeshipping will live for ever.

Yours
Miya :iconmiyatoriaka:
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Ash/Satoshi/Sacha and Misty/Kasumi/Ondine, also Pikachu and Azurill belong to © Satoshi Tajiri, Pokémon Nintendo, Game Freak
FanArt belongs to © *MiyaToriaka
Contest entry to *OneWingedMuse's Pokeshipping-Song-Contest

Critiques


:iconcaat:
This is a beautifully powerful art piece which captures a wide range of emotions between Ash and Misty. I am particularly drawn to the colouring technique which is smooth yet strong - outlining realistically the details of the folds of clothing (particularly the fabric clenched between fingers on the far left and right sides of the image) and picking out the textures of the hair and depth in the eyes.

The composition of the images shows the passage of time and the emotions felt during that time well. In particular, the Johto related image with its slightly faded look gave me the impression of distance - not just physically but also emotionally - between the featured characters.

I am also fascinated with how the artist has been able to convey the appearance of water drops in this medium, something that isn't easy to do.

As a final thought, a darker-coloured background instead of the white one may have contributed to heightening the emotion further.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
21 out of 21 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconmanzhanz:
It's hard to right a 'critique' on a deviation that does so many things right as this one.

Simply looking at this deviation as line art is is fantastic. The layout and symbolism with Ash and Misty shows a level of true artistic professionalism rarely seen among fan artists. The expressions on their faces show more than anything seen from the characters in the actually anime, and show the artists true thoughts on the relationship between them. Coupled with the character pulling at their own chests, the emotional tension bleeds from this deviation

The traditional coloring flawless. Dynamic highlights and shadows,Contrasting colors, and a wild variety of hues, make this a joy to look at. Coloring overall shows a true mastery of the traditional artistic medium

It's often quite difficult to be truly original with fan art, but the layout and artistic vision of the piece show what can be done when artist uses what their talents to embellish a popular series and pairing.

What comes out is a artistic piece that is gorgeous visually, emotionally, and artistically.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
51 out of 51 deviants thought this was fair.

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Comments


:iconskyblader:
Wow it looks real. Nice work! :)

--
When the war of the beasts brings about the world’s end
The goddess descends from the sky
Wings of light and dark spread afar
She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting
:iconchili19:
really lovely piece of art ^^ good luck in the contest

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"Månen vet… att blod ska gjutas här i natt.
På kopparbanor över sjön går en visshet fram:
lik skola ligga bland alarna på en underskön strand."

I'm Björn Borg here
:iconl-mon:
greaat *w*
It's an amazing picture
Really awesome *w*
Great, great work, I love it :heart:

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:pokeball: Los frikis dominaremos el mundo~
~Que las cabras te acompañen
:icon1elle202:
So amazing! It fits the song so well!

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Ash + Misty= :heart: Drew + May= :heart:
Gary + Dawn= :heart: James + Jessie= :heart:

Icon made by: ~sorato-lover! Thank you!

I'll respect your shippings as long as you respect mine!

:peace: Proud to be a Tolerant Shipper :peace:
:iconunneeded-luck:
This is really cute! Full of drama that they feel. It's really nice. ^^

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-Fun flies when clocks are thrown around. It's even funnier when they hit friends in the face. :lmao:

:damphyr::pokeball:

"I'm awake and I'm alive!" Skillet fan!
:iconmollysa:
OMG! That's how you draw the actual song-picture for a contest! I love it! Hopefully you did well on that contest ^^

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I'm Raimon Taro (Monta) in dA's Eyeshield 21 Crew!

Papillon Myu is mine on ~SaintSeiyaClaim

Michael from Angel Sanctuary is mine on ~claim-a-bishie

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